Ivan Ramirez

Peer Work Shop follow up

 

 

A.) I learned a lot from reading my classmates papers, the biggest thing I learned were some ideas on how to better my own. I saw some of the mistakes they did and some of the good things they did that I would like to change on my paper.

 

B.) The biggest suggestion that I had with my paper was formatting stuff, I did not use MLA format properly and my margins were not the right length. I also got told to fix some of the wording on my sentences and to add more detail on some parts of my paper.

 

C.) I agree with there comments because after re-reading my papers there are many things I need to fix that they mentioned. I will take it into consideration when writing my paper because it was good helpful advise that will make my paper better. They pointed out mistakes that need to be fixed. Like I said before, I did find the person helpful because I would have for sure missed some of the mistakes I committed if he did not point them out.